Success Is Counted Sweetest/Triumph's Tune This is a little something I did a few years ago for English class. I rewrote a poem. So, first, the poem I read, and then, the one I wrote.

Success Is Counted Sweetest

Success is counted sweetest
By those who ne'er succeed.
To comprehend a nectar
Requires sorest need.

No one of all the purple host
Who took the flag today
Can tell the definition,
So clear of victory.

As he defeated - dying -
On whose forbidden ear
The distant strains of triumph
Burst agonized and clear!
- Emily Dickinson

Triumph's Tune

Winning is greatest to those
who never come in first
To understand victory
Needs understanding cursed.

Not one of all the winners
Who took away the lives
Can tell the meaning, so clear, of winning
As that is for what he strives.

As he dies after valor shown
on ears not meant to hear
The far-away tune of triumph
made completely clear.

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